Hope you enjoy it!
http://free.hipcomix.com/gallery/buk01jet01

Very nice conclusion!

A solid bit of storytelling and a lot of great action, nicely wrapped up.

Keep up the grand job!

I agree. A nice little bit of ass kicking from a nice little piece of ass. Great job!

That's what we need more of here: fiendish torture of the heroine!

I don't even mind the commercial interruption. Reminds me of TV.

-Mike

p.s. You need a better way of naming your files to keep them in order.

Thank you Max...when I was younger I dreamed of being a writer but I was never able to truly harness words in the manner that a writer needs to, however seeing is truly believing and through pictures combined with some narration/dialogue I am finally able to pull off storytelling in a manner that I enjoy.

Domo Arigoto Doctor Robo!

I plan on putting Jet through some hardcore scenarions hehehe...Good thing shes genetically augmented...she wont break!
You know I really enjoyed doing the commercial ...Its kinda out of left field and truly just a flight of pure goofiness but some people will recognize what Im parodying and hopefully theyll enjoy it as much as I enjoyed making it.
For those who never collected comics :


And as for my file system...you should see my desktop hahahahahaha

That's pretty funny. Who knew that Captain America worked part-time for Hostess?

heheh yep the Captain is pimpin the twinkies!